September 7, 2007
Welcome to our class blog.
Here’s a feature on Emily Dickinson and our poem. Please click on her name then, when you get to the next site choose “listen to the show” form the options on the left. Listen to the feature-it’s about 15 minutes long. Then read and complete the rest of the assignment.
This is the poem we’re talking about. It helps to read it through a couple of times before you listen to the show.
Consider:
- Look up the Fireside poets mentioned in the show. Find a poem by Longfellow-read it and discuss the differences between him and Dickinson in your reply.
- Look Up Billy Collins. Read one of his poems and post a link to it on your reply.
- Look up Walt Whitman. Read one of his poems and post a link to it on your reply. Why do you think he might be considered “scandalous”? Explain your choice.
- Find and image that you think fits Dickinson’s poem. Insert it or a link to it in you reply. (Extra credit if it’s a moving rather than static image.)
- Find and insert or link to some music that you think goes along well with Dickinson’s poem. Explain your choice.
Because I could not stop for Death,
He kindly stopped for me;
The carriage held but just ourselves
And Immortality.We slowly drove, he knew no haste,
And I had put away
My labor, and my leisure too,
For his civility.We passed the school, where children strove
At recess, in the ring;
We passed the fields of gazing grain,
We passed the setting sun.Or rather, be passed us;
The dews grew quivering and chill,
For only gossamer my gown,
My tippet only tulle.We paused before house that seemed
A swelling of the ground;
The roof was scarcely visible,
The cornice but a mound.Since then ’tis centuries, and yet each
Feels shorter than the day
I first surmised the horses’ heads
Were toward eternity.
Here’s the Poem Billy Collins:
Taking Off Emily Dickinson’s Clothes (Yes, That’s really the title)
First, her tippet made of tulle,
easily lifted off her shoulders and laid
on the back of a wooden chair.And her bonnet,
the bow undone with a light forward pull.
Then the long white dress, a more
complicated matter with mother-of-pearl
buttons down the back,
so tiny and numerous that it takes forever
before my hands can part the fabric,
like a swimmer’s dividing water,
and slip inside.You will want to know
that she was standing
by an open window in an upstairs bedroom,
motionless, a little wide-eyed,
looking out at the orchard below,
the white dress puddled at her feet
on the wide-board, hardwood floor.The complexity of women’s undergarments
in nineteenth-century America
is not to be waved off,
and I proceeded like a polar explorer
through clips, clasps, and moorings,
catches, straps, and whalebone stays,
sailing toward the iceberg of her nakedness.Later, I wrote in a notebook
it was like riding a swan into the night,
but, of course, I cannot tell you everything -
the way she closed her eyes to the orchard,
how her hair tumbled free of its pins,
how there were sudden dashes
whenever we spoke.What I can tell you is
it was terribly quiet in Amherst
that Sabbath afternoon,
nothing but a carriage passing the house,
a fly buzzing in a windowpane.So I could plainly hear her inhale
when I undid the very top
hook-and-eye fastener of her corset
and I could hear her sigh when finally it was unloosed,
the way some readers sigh when they realize
that Hope has feathers,
that reason is a plank,
that life is a loaded gun
that looks right at you with a yellow eye.
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December 11th, 2007 at 2:10 pm
http://141.7.30.1:4444/cim/mitarb/kipp/private/literat/longfell.htm
There are many differences between Dickenson and Longfellow. Dickenson’s poems were plain and simple; they usually always had some type of rhythm. She didn’t write for other people’s understanding. She understood the poems that she had wrote that were not literal to others, but to her were perfectly clear. It seemed as though she personified death to seem serene. In her poem she says, “Because I could not stop for Death,
He kindly stopped for me;” Death was her personal agency, her escape. I chose Longfellow’s poem, A Day of Sunshine, to compare with her works of art. In his poem, Longfellow describes the wonderful natures. He talks about simple things that make his surroundings good. In his poem he says,
“Through every fibre of my brain,
Through every nerve, through every vein,
I feel the electric thrill, the touch
Of life, that seems almost too much.”
He is talking about life having an ecstatic electric thrill on him. The difference between the two is that Emily felt that death was a comforting life feeling. Henry felt that life was full of wonders.
December 12th, 2007 at 1:51 pm
1. Mr. Longfellow wrote about a young boy who is interested in learning everything he can. He is the ideal guy with soft and silken locks with brown and tender eyes; he is a builder that sat on his father lap to understand the legends. Longfellow in this poem for one tries to write of life and the want to be smarter, also a dream world where everything is good in the poem CASTLE-BUILDER. On the other side Emily Dickinson talks about her life how she feels personally but most of the time she talks about death and the grim ripper. To some she might seem insane or just makes us feel depressed, on the other hand she is brilliant and relates to a lot of people just depends on the type of reader.
2. To A STRANGER I think that Walt Whitman might be considered scandalous because he speaks of lust and wanting physical attention. He also speaks of the enjoyment of another person before marriage. I chose this poem because he talks of seeing a guy or girl and becoming one with them and that show how he is scandalous.
3. Print: The Temptations – Just My Imagination (Running Away With Me) Lyrics print version
Each day through my window I watch her as she passes by.
I say to myself, “You’re such a lucky guy.”
To have a girl like her
is truly a dream come true.
Out of all of the fellas in the world
she belongs to you…
But it was just my imagination
running away with me.
It was just my imagination
running away with me…
Ooh-hoo-hoo-hooh
Soon we’ll be married..
and raise a family.
In a cozy, little home out in the country
with two children, maybe three.
I tell you, I can visualize it all.
This couldn’t be a dream for too real it all seems.
But it was just my imagination — once again –
running away with me.
I tell you it was just my imagination
running away with me…
Every night, on my knees I pray,
“Dear Lord, hear my plea…
don’t ever let another take her love from me
or I will surely die..”
Ooh, her love is heavenly;
when her arms enfold me,
I hear a tender rhapsody…
but in reality, she doesn’t even know me
Just my imagination — once again –
running away with me.
Tell you it was just my imagination
running away with me.
I never met her, but I can’t forget her.
Just my imagination..
– ooh yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah –
running away with me
December 12th, 2007 at 1:52 pm
7.After reading Dickinson’s poem “Because I could not stop for death” and Longfellow’s “The Day Is Done”, I noticed some difference between the two poets. For one, simply the way they write is away that they differ. Longfellow use a form of writing poetry in which the last word in the second line matches the last word in last line, “I forget what you would call that but I remember learning it last year when we were reading “Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet”, but anyway he use is that, while Dickinson’s poem uses no such form of rhyming in her words of poetry. But I guess if you read it in such away the words she uses has a kind of rhythm to it. Another way their different is the way they use their words when they write. Emily Dickinson use a word in her poem “Because I could not stop for death” when she says “We passed the fields of gazing grain”. Now it’s the word gazing grain she uses it as if makes since though nobody can really decipher what she means by it. Also when you read both these poems you may notice when you read Dickinson’s poem you know right away what she is talking about, the way she paints the seen gives you almost direct information, while Longfellow I would say does the exact opposite, using many metaphors to what he talking about is something that you have to pay constant attention to when reading.
8. To a Stranger
By Walt Whitman
1819-1892
________________________________________
Passing stranger! you do not know how longingly I look upon you,
You must be he I was seeking, or she I was seeking, (it comes to me
as of a dream,)
I have somewhere surely lived a life of joy with you,
All is recall’d as we flit by each other, fluid, affectionate,
chaste, matured,
You grew up with me, were a boy with me or a girl with me,
I ate with you and slept with you, your body has become not yours
only nor left my body mine only,
You give me the pleasure of your eyes, face, flesh, as we pass, you
take of my beard, breast, hands, in return,
I am not to speak to you, I am to think of you when I sit alone or
wake at night alone,
I am to wait, I do not doubt I am to meet you again,
I am to see to it that I do not lose you.
http://www.daypoems.net/poems/1934.html – 14k
It took sometime to find a poem that made Walt Whitman look scandalous but to me finding this poem “To a Stranger”, I can understand why back in those days why he might seem scandalous and might be regarded as unmorally fit for people. Through my reading of this poem I seem to understand that he’s talking of falling in love with a person and shows some homosexuality in poem when he says “You must be he I was seeking, or she I was seeking”, never quit stating the sex of the stranger who he is talking about. And that points out more of his supposed homosexuality is when he says “You grew up with me, were a boy with me or a girl with me”, which kind of states his lover’s role in this relationship. Then kind of goes in to the detail on the sex they had. So I can see how back in those days he seem as a heathen, living an unmoral life style back in those days. But in today’s world he could be considered bold and open about his life.
9. AMinor by JS Bach
classicalpiano.com/ – 11k
The music that I have chosen is played with only one instrument, a piano. I have chosen that instrument because I fell that the piano’s smooth rhyme is the only instrument that could match the mood of poems given scenery. The music that I have chosen is called AMinor by JS Bach. I felt it was perfect in my search for that slow melody and steady rhythm for Emily Dickinson’s poem “Because I could not stop for death”. I really could not find anything else that quit match it liked this.
10.
Embrace
You know the parlor trick.
wrap your arms around your own body
and from the back it looks like
someone is embracing you
her hands grasping your shirt
her fingernails teasing your neck
from the front it is another story
you never looked so alone
your crossed elbows and screwy grin
you could be waiting for a tailor
to fit you with a straight jacket
one that would hold you really tight.
http://www.poemhunter.com/billy-collins/poems/page-1/ – 33k
12.
http://www.photographersdirect.com/stockimages/r/rain.asp – 83k
December 12th, 2007 at 1:53 pm
Emily Dickson was one of the famous poets in the 19th century. Emily Dickson wrote about her death and that someone is holding back on her death
The Reaper and Flowers compared to the Emily Dickson’s story had many difference.
(1)
(2) O! captain O! Captain
http://www.poetry-archive.com/w/o_captain_my_captain.html
(3) Kreisler plays Kreisler – Marche Miniature Viennoise
http://youtube.com/watch?v=o-oEyKHTapY
This is one of the songs that Emily Dickinson used to listen back in the 19th Century. Emily Dickson was really famous back then. People would use her poems in everything that was decent. The violin that is playing keeps the death fear come back. Most of Emily Dickinson’s poems talk about how life is.
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/consolation/
clatterymachinery.files.wordpress.com/2007/03/emily-dickinson.jpg
This picture was taken during the 1830’s
youtube.com/watch?v=wBSuRMcnqEs
December 12th, 2007 at 1:54 pm
Emily Dickinson
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow was a member of a windy gang called the Fireside Poets. They wrote about long midnight poems based on long dreary nights and based a lot of them on Paul Revere. Emily Dickenson was the complete opposite, Longfellow when he was to do poetry he would write with bold statements with a big “P”. Emily Dickinson wasn’t so hard spoken she would write about the economic side. She would write poetry with a little “p”. When Longfellow would write he would tell stories about what he is talking about. The Fireside gang would gather around a fire and tell stories. Emily Dickinson would write short poems about her reality, like death. Dickinson wouldn’t write for other people to understand her she would write for her no one else. She didn’t care about what other people thought, as long as her emotions and thoughts were down on the poem. A lot still loved her poems. She manages to be interesting but not obscure.
http://www.everypoet.com/archive/poetry/Henry_Wadsworth_Longfellow/longfellow_birds_of_passage_changed.htm
December 12th, 2007 at 1:55 pm
Emily Dickinson Music
Blake Langenstein
12/9/07
2nd hour
The song I chose that represents Emily Dickinson is “Bring Me to Life” by Evanescence. http://www.elyrics.net/read/e/evanescence-lyrics/bring-me-to-life-lyrics.html that is a link to the web site were I found the lyrics to the song. I feel this song represents Emily Dickinson because it has a kind of eerie tune to it. That is what I feel when I think of Emily Dickinson. If the song had no words I feel it would match better than the way it is now with words. When I first herd this song when I was younger I thought it reminded me of a video game when I was in an underground cave that had a spooky feeling to it. When I first herd the song I thought that I might need to use this song later, I just had that kind of feeling. I chose this song over some of the others that Evanescence had just because this one really had that eerie feeling I was looking for that could represent Emily Dickinson’s poetry. One of the other songs I listened to by Evanescence was “Sweet Sacrifice”. The way I picked the song was if I heard this with no one around, would I feel a little bit uneasy. That is how I picked the song “Bring Me to Life” to represent Emily Dickinson.
Longfellow Verse Dickinson
Blake Langenstein
12/7/07
2nd hour
The two poems I read from Henry Wadsworth Longfellow and Emily Dickinson was “I Could Not Stop for Death” by Dickinson and “My Lost Youth” by Longfellow. Dickinson’s poems were more often about death. Were Longfellow wrote more often about familiar, clear, and simple things. In some of Dickinson’s poems there phrases that don’t make sense. For example, “Gazing grain” no one knows what that means. You might think that it should be “Grazing grain”, but when you hear it in the poem it sounds right. After you think about it you know there is no way that is real. Longfellow’s writing makes sense unlike Dickinson’s style. The word usage not only flows but when you go back to think about it all the words fit together. Longfellow’s poem “My Lost Youth” describes different parts of events when he was growing up. Dickinson was a very radical poet. Were Longfellow was not so much of that. Dickinson wrote about death and other extremes like that. Were as Longfellow wrote more about different experiences that he has had threw out his life like getting drafted into the war and different parts of the war for instance when he arrived on the shore and when he saw another Spanish ship. Those a few differences that I found between Longfellow and Dickinson.
Longfellow Verse Dickinson
Walt Whitman is Scandalous
Blake Langenstein
12/8/07
2nd hour
Walt Whitman has been considered a scandalous person and poet. The poem that I have read by Walt Whitman that showed me that he was a scandalous person was “A Women Waits for Me” by Walt Whitman. In this poem he is describing women and sex that he is having with a certain women. He describes sex as being bodies, souls, meanings, proofs, and results. He does not mention the women’s name that he is having sex with. He describes the women’s body. He says how tan her skin is. He also mentions a few other women. He says he has a women waiting for him and the others understand him and will not deny him. He says that all the women are worthy of me. He does not in any way say that they are less of a person than he is. He says he does not harm his women in any way. He says that women are mysteries. “The passions, loves, beauties, delights of the earth, the governments, judges, gods, follow’d persons of the earth” he says these are all aspects of sex and they all can relate to your real life. That is how I fin Walt Whitman a scandalous person.
December 12th, 2007 at 1:56 pm
THE GOOD PART THAT SHALL NOT BE TAKEN AWAY
She dwells by Great Kenhawa’s side,
In valleys green and cool;
And all her hope and all her pride
Are in the village school.
Her soul, like the transparent air
That robes the hills above,
Though not of earth, encircles there
All things with arms of love.
And thus she walks among her girls
With praise and mild rebukes;
Subduing e’en rude village churls
By her angelic looks.
She reads to them at eventide
Of One who came to save;
To cast the captive’s chains aside
And liberate the slave.
And oft the blessed time foretells
When all men shall be free;
And musical, as silver bells,
Their falling chains shall be.
And following her beloved Lord,
In decent poverty,
She makes her life one sweet record
And deed of charity.
For she was rich, and gave up all
To break the iron bands
Of those who waited in her hall,
And labored in her lands.
Long since beyond the Southern Sea
Their outbound sails have sped,
While she, in meek humility,
Now earns her daily bread.
It is their prayers, which never cease,
That clothe her with such grace;
Their blessing is the light of peace
That shines upon her face.
I Sit and Look Out
http://quotations.about.com/cs/poemlyrics/a/I_Sit_And_Look_.htm
Poem lyrics of I Sit And Look Out by Walt Whitman.
I sit and look out upon all the sorrows of the world, and upon all
oppression and shame;
I hear secret convulsive sobs from young men, at anguish with
themselves, remorseful after deeds done;
I see, in low life, the mother misused by her children, dying,
neglected, gaunt, desperate;
I see the wife misused by her husband–I see the treacherous seducer
of young women;
I mark the ranklings of jealousy and unrequited love, attempted to be
hid–I see these sights on the earth;
I see the workings of battle, pestilence, tyranny–I see martyrs and
prisoners;
I observe a famine at sea–I observe the sailors casting lots who
shall be kill’d, to preserve the lives of the rest;
I observe the slights and degradations cast by arrogant persons upon
laborers, the poor, and upon negroes, and the like;
All these–All the meanness and agony without end, I sitting, look
out upon,
See, hear, and am silent.
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets/billy_collins/poems/11334
Silence by Billy Collins
Now it is time to say what you have to say.
The room is quiet.
The whirring fan has been unplugged,
and the girl who was tapping
a pencil on her desktop has been removed.
So tell us what is on your mind.
We want to hear the sound of your foliage,
the unraveling of your tool kit,
your songs of loneliness,
your songs of hurt.
The trains are motionless on the tracks,
the ships are at restn the harbor.
The dogs are cocking their heads
and the gods are peering down from their balloons.
The town is hushed,
and everyone here has a copy.
December 12th, 2007 at 1:58 pm
http://www.online-literature.com/henry_longfellow/942/
The differences between Longfellow and Dickinson are that Longfellow was part of the fireside poets and he wrote long poems that were more like stories that hade more details and explained his theme in longer more detailed. Dickinson was making the same point but in softer more traditional easy of a poem. Dickinson describes her poems in a short amount of space, and in this space tells a story of how she feels. Longfellow tells more of a story length poem. Longfellow writes powerful, descriptive, long poems that tell more of a story. Dickinson tells the some story but in more of a modest soft way that better represents the normal person, because she uses less of the words but still gets her point across. So Longfellow and Dickinson are different, Longfellow tells powerful poems that have many stanzas and are more of a story, Dickinson tells the same poem but in a less more modest way.
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/19615
He might be “scandalous” in the ways that he discusses many real topics that people may not want to hear, he tells things that are strange and that people are not use to hearing or maybe seem strange. Walt Whitman writes about things that are not normal in a certain sense that he writes about, and he mostly writes about himself in different scenes, and situations that are different from what people normally or traditionally think of a poem. Whitman explains different things that are personal experiences that have happened to him during his life, or writes a poem about those experiences. Whitman can be scandalous in most of his poems and maybe people like that and maybe they don’t but I like his poems none the less.
SONG:
Green Day – Boulevard Of Broken Dreams lyrics
I walk a lonely road
The only one that I have ever known
Don’t know where it goes
But it’s home to me and I walk alone
I walk this empty street
On the Boulevard of Broken Dreams
Where the city sleeps
and I’m the only one and I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk a…
My shadow’s the only one that walks beside me
My shallow heart’s the only thing that’s beating
Sometimes I wish someone out there will find me
‘Til then I walk alone
Ah-ah, Ah-ah, Ah-ah, Aaah-ah,
Ah-ah, Ah-ah, Ah-ah
I’m walking down the line
That divides me somewhere in my mind
On the border line
Of the edge and where I walk alone
Read between the lines
What’s fucked up and everything’s alright
Check my vital signs
To know I’m still alive and I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk a…
My shadow’s the only one that walks beside me
My shallow heart’s the only thing that’s beating
Sometimes I wish someone out there will find me
‘Til then I walk alone
Ah-ah, Ah-ah, Ah-ah, Aaah-ah
Ah-ah, Ah-ah
I walk alone
I walk a…
I walk this empty street
On the Boulevard of Broken Dreams
Where the city sleeps
And I’m the only one and I walk a…
My shadow’s the only one that walks beside me
My shallow heart’s the only thing that’s beating
Sometimes I wish someone out there will find me
‘Til then I walk alone…
I chose this song because it tells the story of walking along an unknown road and cannot stop for anything. That is what I believe that Dickinson was saying is some ways that you cannot stop that you must always be on the go and cannot even stop for death. That is what this song says, in some ways, that you just have to keep walking along the unknown road and keep walking until some comes along and finds you even if it is death and when he picks you up you still keep going but not always in the physical sense. That might be what Dickinson is trying to say, that some times we cannot stop for anyone or anything, and must continue on the road of life only until we are found, mostly by death because that is when we are set free and are no longer held down by the strings of material things and society. Maybe that is the thing that people either don’t want to hear, or are afraid of the eventual, and inevitable fact of death, and people see the fact the we must all continue on the path even though we know that eventually death will pick us up and our lives on earth will end. So that is why I chose this song.
Billy Collins Poem:
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/another-reason-why-i-don-t-keep-a-gun-in-the-hou/
December 12th, 2007 at 1:59 pm
2nd Hour
Part 1. (http://www.island-of-freedom.com/LONG7.HTM)
While I am reading the poems called Children written by Longfellow and because I can not stop for death written by Dickinson, there are some things that are different between them. As I am reading Longfellow’s poems, I noticed that most of his poems tell stories. In Dickinson’s poems, she just tells people about her own thoughts. She doesn’t tell stories like Longfellow. His poems are long and her poems are short. His poem talks about how things would be different if things were missing from it. In Dickinson’s, it just talks about a sort sensory of description. I noticed, in the poem she wrote, most of the sentences started with “We.”
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15812)
While I am reading a poem that Walt Whitman wrote, I think it might be “scandalous.” He says the love that he has given away, he had no return of the same thing he did. To me, this is scandalous because if he didn’t get the same return back then why be with that person that he “so called” gave a lot of love to.
http://www.lyricsandsongs.com/song/618769.html)
The song I chose to go with Dickinson’s poem is called “because I can not stop for death” by: Natalie Merchant. It goes along with this poem because the song and poem is called the same and the word and lyrics are the same. The song talks about everything that is said in Dickinson’s poem. This song goes along with it because its talks about the same things.
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/16497)
http://www.bartleby.com/113/2066.html)
December 12th, 2007 at 2:00 pm
Ben Slogeris
Mr.Kreinbring’s blog
Longfellow = happy Emily Dickenson= Death
In Longfellow’s poems a psalm of life, (http://www.potw.org/archive/potw232.html) the poem was about how life is an empty dream, and you should treat life to the fullest because you never know when you are going to die. He talks about what he thinks is right for us and what is right about the way that we live. I think that he has a lot of good poems and they have very catchy things in them. Emily Dickenson talks about death and bad things in a lot of her poems. But her poems start of sad and then have a happy ending to throw the reader off guard. Emily Dickenson’s poems are for more of the gothic people because they are very scary. In Emily Dickenson’s poem Success is counted sweetest, (http://www.poetry-archive.com/d/success_is_counted_sweetest.html) she describes some who was maybe in a war and he is laying there dieing and his army is about to win the war. He then feels triumph even though he is going to die because he is happy for other people rather than himself. In that poem Dickenson had some dieing but there was somewhat of a happy ending. So I would rather read poems by Longfellow about good things and about life and ways it can be better, rather than to read a strange a poem about death that is very disturbing by Emily Dickenson. They are two very different poets that have there on style and they both believe on different things so there is a big difference between the two of them.
In Walt Whitman poem O Captain! My Captain! http://www.poetry-archive.com/w/o_captain_my_captain.html) it is considered scandalous just like him. In his poem he talks about a captain that is his father. He has reached safety and he is not going to be harmed any more. But on the deck the captain lays fallen dead and cold. That is a very weird way to end the poem and the poem itself is very hard to understand what is going on. He is very scandalous because he isn’t making his poems clear and they have a bad ending where someone dies or something bad will happen near the end. He is trying to get the reader to see the other side of the poem and to make you think about the poem in a different way then you would probably view it from. He doesn’t want to be like every other poet out there, he wants to be different and that is what makes is poems interesting and scandalous. Another very controversial poem by Walt Whitman was song of myself. There was a expression of sexuality ranging from his admiration for nineteenth-century ideals. Walt Whitman is considered scandalous because in his poems he is disgraceful and very shameful.
A song that reminds me of Emily Dickenson’s poems would be Destroyer by Static X http://www.jamglue.com/tracks/194377-Static-X-Destroyer) I choose this song because it is about destroying and that is one of the themes that are in Emily Dickenson’s poems. Her poems fit the description of the song because her poems are about death and bad things. Emily poems are not fun to read unless you are gothic. That is her type of poetry, she doesn’t use the conventional way of writing poetry and she thinks outside the box in her poems. But even though her poems are about death she still has a lot of very interesting poems out there for many readers to read. That’s what makes her such a great poet, she gives the readers the truth in her poems and she doesn’t lack in detail when describing them. Her poems are to get the reader to think about death and to help them understand about it. She wants us to feel death so that they can live the rest of their life to the fullest. If I’m in a bad mood then I would read her poems and then it will turn my mood around and then I will have a good day.
February 6th, 2008 at 9:16 pm
i like the poem about “walking alone” i like the way she uses the word and it couht my attention.
I like to see how people react whe they read these things